1 files changed, 37 insertions, 29 deletions
diff --git a/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md b/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md
index ae88a7c..ecf07cc 100644
--- a/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md
+++ b/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md
@@ -79,13 +79,13 @@ Our final plan was the following:
 |[Day 8](./day8)|Rifugio Passo Cereda|Rifugio Boz|1210m|-860m|12.8km|
 |[Day 9](./day9)|Rifugio Boz|Croce d'Aune|800m|-1500m|20.0km|
-For the first and last days, the plan was to have someone bring us there
+For the first and last days, the plan was to have someone bring
-or pick us up, so we spent only 8 nights out.  We did not realize at the
+us there or pick us up, so we spent only 8 nights out.  We did not
-time, but this plan gave us a nice balance between high mountain huts
+realize at the time, but this plan gave us a nice balance between
-(for the real mountaineering experience) and proper hotels (for better
+high mountain huts (for the real mountaineering experience) and
-comfort); after all, every one of these hotels was also called *rifugio*
+proper hotels (for better comfort); after all, every one of these
-(or *hütte* in German, or *utja* in [Ladin](TODO link) TODO check
+hotels was also called *rifugio* (or *hütte* in German, or *utia* in
-speling of utja).
+[Ladin](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ladin_language)).
 ## Packing up
@@ -99,13 +99,17 @@ needed something to eat throughout the day, too.
 In the end, this is what we packed:
-TODO check the technical terms
 ### Hiking gear
-* Hiking boots
+* Hiking boots.
-* TODO bastoni da montagna
+* [Hiking sticks](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trekking_pole), similar
-* TODO corda e moschettone
+  to [nordic walking](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nordic_walking) poles,
+  but they are usually kept shorter. They help pushing when going up
+  and keep you stable when you walk down.
+* A simple harness consisting of a strong rope with a
+  [carabiner](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carabiner), to be used
+  for the occasional *equipped trails* (think of a
+  [via ferrata](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Via_ferrata), but easier).
 * Two water bottles (0.5L + 1L). The smaller one was a thermos-like bottle
  to keep the contents warm, but I ended up never filling it with hot
  water or tea. It would have been better to just bring two lightweight
@@ -114,19 +118,22 @@ TODO check the technical terms
 ### Clothes
-TODO some intro about most of my clothing was some synthetic fiber
+Most of the clothes we brought with us were made of some synthetic
-     that dries up quickly (although in practice it was extremely humid)
+fabric that was extremely lightweight and quick to dry up.
-* TODO 4 magliette tecniche, ne bastavano 2-3
+* 4 t-shirts (2 or 3 would have been enough)
-* TODO pantaloni da montagna
+* 4 pairs of underwear (again, 2 or 3 would have been enough)
-* TODO felpa super leggera ma che teneva caldo
+* Zip-off hiking trousers that could be converted to shorts (but
-* TODO mutande tecniche 4 paia, anche qui 2-3 bastavano
+  I ended up almost always using the in trouser form)
-* TODO un cambio completo (mutande, calzini, maglietta, maglia a maniche
+* A full set of "normal" clothes (underwear, socks, t-shirt, shorts) that
-  lunghe, pantaloncini) non tecnico, per stare in rifugio.
+  I used only in the huts
-* TODO una felpa pesante che non ho mai usato, quella leggera è bastata
+* A lightweight hoodie that somehow kept me warm amazingly well. I used
+  it for any temperature betwee 2°C to 20°C, as it did not feel
+  uncomfortable when it was too hot for a regular hoodie.
+* A regular cotton hoodie, that I ended up never using.
 * Slippers.
 * A baseball cap.
-* A rain poncho. I did not like using it, because it made me sweat a lot
+* A rain poncho. I did not like wearing it, because it made me sweat a lot
  and I ended up getting wet anyway. But in some moments it was necessary.
 * Rain trousers. I ended up never using these, my regular hiking trousers
  were somewhat waterproof, and the rain poncho covered all the rest.
@@ -136,14 +143,15 @@ TODO some intro about most of my clothing was some synthetic fiber
 ### Food and medicine
 * The only food we pack were protein bars. We brought 3 per person per
-  day, but this was way too much. I ended up eating one per day (TODO was
+  day, but this was way too much. I ended up eating one ~100g bar per day
-  it around 100g?) on average, because we were often able to eat something
+  on average, because we were often able to eat something
-  (like a slice of [*Strüdel*](TODO link)) in the huts we walked by during
+  (like a slice of [*Strüdel*](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apple_strudel))
-  the day.
+  in the huts we walked by during the day.
-* [Energy tablets](TODO link or something). Some quick source of energy boost,
+* Energy tablets. Some quick source of energy boost,
  they were mostly vitamins with some caffeine.
-* Plasters, both regular ones and [blister platers](TODO link?)
+* Plasters, both regular ones and
-* Painkillers and other basic medicine: (TODO list: naproxene, paracetamol)
+  [blister platers](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Compeed).
+* Painkillers and other basic medicine.
 ### Other stuff

diff --git a/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md b/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md index ae88a7c..ecf07cc 100644 --- a/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md +++ b/src/av2/preparation/preparation.md
@@ -79,13 +79,13 @@ Our final plan was the following:
79	\|[Day 8](./day8)\|Rifugio Passo Cereda\|Rifugio Boz\|1210m\|-860m\|12.8km\|	79	\|[Day 8](./day8)\|Rifugio Passo Cereda\|Rifugio Boz\|1210m\|-860m\|12.8km\|
80	\|[Day 9](./day9)\|Rifugio Boz\|Croce d'Aune\|800m\|-1500m\|20.0km\|	80	\|[Day 9](./day9)\|Rifugio Boz\|Croce d'Aune\|800m\|-1500m\|20.0km\|
81		81
82	For the first and last days, the plan was to have someone bring us there	82	For the first and last days, the plan was to have someone bring
83	or pick us up, so we spent only 8 nights out. We did not realize at the	83	us there or pick us up, so we spent only 8 nights out. We did not
84	time, but this plan gave us a nice balance between high mountain huts	84	realize at the time, but this plan gave us a nice balance between
85	(for the real mountaineering experience) and proper hotels (for better	85	high mountain huts (for the real mountaineering experience) and
86	comfort); after all, every one of these hotels was also called rifugio	86	proper hotels (for better comfort); after all, every one of these
87	(or hütte in German, or utja in [Ladin](TODO link) TODO check	87	hotels was also called rifugio (or hütte in German, or utia in
88	speling of utja).	88	[Ladin](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ladin_language)).
89		89
90	## Packing up	90	## Packing up
91		91
@@ -99,13 +99,17 @@ needed something to eat throughout the day, too.
99		99
100	In the end, this is what we packed:	100	In the end, this is what we packed:
101		101
102	TODO check the technical terms
103
104	### Hiking gear	102	### Hiking gear
105		103
106	* Hiking boots	104	* Hiking boots.
107	* TODO bastoni da montagna	105	* [Hiking sticks](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trekking_pole), similar
108	* TODO corda e moschettone	106	to [nordic walking](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nordic_walking) poles,
		107	but they are usually kept shorter. They help pushing when going up
		108	and keep you stable when you walk down.
		109	* A simple harness consisting of a strong rope with a
		110	[carabiner](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carabiner), to be used
		111	for the occasional equipped trails (think of a
		112	[via ferrata](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Via_ferrata), but easier).
109	* Two water bottles (0.5L + 1L). The smaller one was a thermos-like bottle	113	* Two water bottles (0.5L + 1L). The smaller one was a thermos-like bottle
110	to keep the contents warm, but I ended up never filling it with hot	114	to keep the contents warm, but I ended up never filling it with hot
111	water or tea. It would have been better to just bring two lightweight	115	water or tea. It would have been better to just bring two lightweight
@@ -114,19 +118,22 @@ TODO check the technical terms
114		118
115	### Clothes	119	### Clothes
116		120
117	TODO some intro about most of my clothing was some synthetic fiber	121	Most of the clothes we brought with us were made of some synthetic
118	that dries up quickly (although in practice it was extremely humid)	122	fabric that was extremely lightweight and quick to dry up.
119		123
120	* TODO 4 magliette tecniche, ne bastavano 2-3	124	* 4 t-shirts (2 or 3 would have been enough)
121	* TODO pantaloni da montagna	125	* 4 pairs of underwear (again, 2 or 3 would have been enough)
122	* TODO felpa super leggera ma che teneva caldo	126	* Zip-off hiking trousers that could be converted to shorts (but
123	* TODO mutande tecniche 4 paia, anche qui 2-3 bastavano	127	I ended up almost always using the in trouser form)
124	* TODO un cambio completo (mutande, calzini, maglietta, maglia a maniche	128	* A full set of "normal" clothes (underwear, socks, t-shirt, shorts) that
125	lunghe, pantaloncini) non tecnico, per stare in rifugio.	129	I used only in the huts
126	* TODO una felpa pesante che non ho mai usato, quella leggera è bastata	130	* A lightweight hoodie that somehow kept me warm amazingly well. I used
		131	it for any temperature betwee 2°C to 20°C, as it did not feel
		132	uncomfortable when it was too hot for a regular hoodie.
		133	* A regular cotton hoodie, that I ended up never using.
127	* Slippers.	134	* Slippers.
128	* A baseball cap.	135	* A baseball cap.
129	* A rain poncho. I did not like using it, because it made me sweat a lot	136	* A rain poncho. I did not like wearing it, because it made me sweat a lot
130	and I ended up getting wet anyway. But in some moments it was necessary.	137	and I ended up getting wet anyway. But in some moments it was necessary.
131	* Rain trousers. I ended up never using these, my regular hiking trousers	138	* Rain trousers. I ended up never using these, my regular hiking trousers
132	were somewhat waterproof, and the rain poncho covered all the rest.	139	were somewhat waterproof, and the rain poncho covered all the rest.
@@ -136,14 +143,15 @@ TODO some intro about most of my clothing was some synthetic fiber
136	### Food and medicine	143	### Food and medicine
137		144
138	* The only food we pack were protein bars. We brought 3 per person per	145	* The only food we pack were protein bars. We brought 3 per person per
139	day, but this was way too much. I ended up eating one per day (TODO was	146	day, but this was way too much. I ended up eating one ~100g bar per day
140	it around 100g?) on average, because we were often able to eat something	147	on average, because we were often able to eat something
141	(like a slice of [Strüdel](TODO link)) in the huts we walked by during	148	(like a slice of [Strüdel](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apple_strudel))
142	the day.	149	in the huts we walked by during the day.
143	* [Energy tablets](TODO link or something). Some quick source of energy boost,	150	* Energy tablets. Some quick source of energy boost,
144	they were mostly vitamins with some caffeine.	151	they were mostly vitamins with some caffeine.
145	* Plasters, both regular ones and [blister platers](TODO link?)	152	* Plasters, both regular ones and
146	* Painkillers and other basic medicine: (TODO list: naproxene, paracetamol)	153	[blister platers](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Compeed).
		154	* Painkillers and other basic medicine.
147		155
148	### Other stuff	156	### Other stuff
149		157