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diff --git a/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md b/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md
index baeba8c..f7acb49 100644
--- a/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md
+++ b/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md
@@ -107,11 +107,12 @@ sh(1), but I could not find the time. However, shutting down my pc earlier
 today inspired me to write this short blog entry.
 `shutdown` is an interesting command. It seems like it should be
-straightforward: "computer, please shut down". But the syntax for this
+straightforward: "computer, please shut down". But the syntax for
-simple instruction is quite complicated, and it offers us many more option
+this simple instruction is quite complicated, and it offers us many
-than we would ever want to use, at least in the 21st century. Moreover, as
+more options than we would ever want to use, at least in the 21st
-indicated by the `#` instead of the `$` in the last command, one needs
+century.  Moreover, as indicated by the `#` instead of the `$` in
-superuser privileges to shut down a classic UNIX system.
+the last command, one needs superuser privileges to shut down a
+classic UNIX system.
 This is because, in the time of mainframes, *shutting down* was not such a
 simple operation: multiple users might have been connected to the main

diff --git a/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md b/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md index baeba8c..f7acb49 100644 --- a/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md +++ b/src/blog/2022-07-07-shutdown/shutdown.md
@@ -107,11 +107,12 @@ sh(1), but I could not find the time. However, shutting down my pc earlier
107	today inspired me to write this short blog entry.	107	today inspired me to write this short blog entry.
108		108
109	`shutdown` is an interesting command. It seems like it should be	109	`shutdown` is an interesting command. It seems like it should be
110	straightforward: "computer, please shut down". But the syntax for this	110	straightforward: "computer, please shut down". But the syntax for
111	simple instruction is quite complicated, and it offers us many more option	111	this simple instruction is quite complicated, and it offers us many
112	than we would ever want to use, at least in the 21st century. Moreover, as	112	more options than we would ever want to use, at least in the 21st
113	indicated by the `#` instead of the `$` in the last command, one needs	113	century. Moreover, as indicated by the `#` instead of the `$` in
114	superuser privileges to shut down a classic UNIX system.	114	the last command, one needs superuser privileges to shut down a
		115	classic UNIX system.
115		116
116	This is because, in the time of mainframes, shutting down was not such a	117	This is because, in the time of mainframes, shutting down was not such a
117	simple operation: multiple users might have been connected to the main	118	simple operation: multiple users might have been connected to the main