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@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ the [Cinque Torri](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinque_Torri),
 But we are not going there this time.
 
 The road itself is quite scenic.  Sorry, I did not
-take any pictures pictures.  After we go North, we
-drive through famous turistic villages like Arabba and
+take any pictures pictures.  Going North, we drive
+through popular touristic destinations like Arabba and
 [Corvara](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corvara%2C_South_Tyrol).
-But these small towns leave a weird impression on me, as they consist
-mostly of hotels and a few restaurants and bars - all closed because
+But these small towns leave a weird impression on me, as they are made
+up mostly of hotels and a few restaurants and bars - all closed because
 it is too early for turists to wake up. Are these places just holiday
 resorts now?
 
@@ -45,34 +45,35 @@ Just before we reach Kreutztal, our starting point, it starts raining.
 
 m4_caption({{{{{My dad and I, ready to start hiking.}}}}})
 
-By the time we reach Kreutztal (2000m on sea level), park the car and
-put on our rain clothes, it is already 9:30. And this is going to be
-one of the longest days, at least according to our estimates.
+By the time we reach Kreutztal (2000 meters on sea level), park the car
+and put on our rain clothes, it is already 9:30. And this is going to
+be one of the longest days, at least according to our estimates.
 
-The Plosehütte (2447m) is not far, and we reach it pretty
-quickly. Unfortunately, it is closed for renovations, and we can't even
-get close enough to take a picture of our first checkpoint.
+The [Plosehütte](https://www.plosehuette.com/en/) (2447m) is not
+far, and we reach it pretty quickly. Unfortunately, it is closed for
+renovations, and we can't even get close enough to take a picture of
+our first checkpoint.
 
 At least the view from up there is... something.
 
 ![The Odles, surrounded by clouds](../img/20-1033-odles-clouds.jpg)
 
-m4_caption({{{{{The
-<a href="https://www.val-gardena.com/en/dolomites/geisler-mountain-group">Odles</a>
+m4_caption({{{{{The <a
+href="https://www.val-gardena.com/en/dolomites/geisler-mountain-group">Odles</a>
 surrounded by clouds.}}}}})
 
 The clouds came and went, but this is pretty much the clearest the
 skies have been the whole morning. Besides the cold and the rain being
-unpleasant, the low visibility gave us some technical difficulties: right
-after passing by the hut, we found ourselves on a grassy slope and we
-lost the track. In normal conditions we would have been able to look
-out for the next trail marking, or just walk in the right direction, but
-with this thick fog we were forced to double check our GPS and our maps.
+unpleasant, the low visibility gave us some technical difficulties:
+right after passing by the hut, we found ourselves on a grassy slope and
+we lost the track. In normal conditions we would have been able to look
+out for the next trail marking, but with this thick fog we were forced
+to double check our GPS and our maps.
 
 ## Down through the forest, then up again
 
-Luckily it did not take us long to find the right way, and we kept descending
-in a [larch](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Larch) forest.
+Luckily, it did not take us long to find the right way, and we kept
+descending in a [larch](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Larch) forest.
 
 ![Trail in the forest](../img/20-1150-forest.jpg)
 
@@ -84,44 +85,59 @@ heavy rain, and take a few more pictures of the Odles.
 
 ![Another picture of the Odles](../img/20-1211-odles.jpg)
 
-We reach the Rodella Pass (1867m) at around 13:00, and from there we
-walk up to Schlüterhutte - Rifugio Genova (2297m). As the rain became
-heavier, I did not take many notes of this part of the route.
+We reach the Rodella Pass (1867m) at around 13:00,
+and from there we walk up to [Schlüterhutte - Rifugio
+Genova](https://www.schlueterhuette.com/en/) (2297m). I did not take
+many notes of this part of the journey, there was too much rain for me
+to take out my journal and write.
 
 As the trail is crossed by a stream of water, we have to pass a short
 challenging section, where we are forced to climb on the wet rock.
-The climb itself is not hard, but the trail is not clearly marked
-at that point, which left us wondering if we were doing the right thing.
+The climb itself is not hard, but the trail is not clearly marked at
+that point, which left us wondering if we were doing the right thing.
 
 We are then blocked by a more difficult trail feature: cows.
 
 ![Cows blocking the road](../img/20-1324-cows.jpg)
 
-m4_caption({{{{{Cows are blocking the road.
-Yes, that little gap is the only way forward.}}}}})
+m4_caption({{{{{Cows are blocking the road.  Yes, that little gap is
+the only way forward.}}}}})
 
 After overcoming this zoological obstacle, we reached the
 Schlüterhütte - Rifugio Genova at 16:00 and we stop for a slice of
 [*Apfelstrudel*](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apple_strudel).
 
+![Rifugio Genova in the fog](../img/20-1603-schluterhutte.jpg)
+
+m4_caption(Rifugio Genova - Schlüterhütte in the fog.)
+
 ## The long descent to the village
 
-At 6 hours and 30 minutes of hiking, this would have been a good
-first day.  But unfortunately we cannot stop here. At 16:30 we begin
-the long descent towards Lungiarü (1398m).
+At 6 hours and 30 minutes of hiking, this would have been a good first
+day.  But unfortunately we cannot stop here. At 16:30 we begin the long
+descent towards Lungiarü (1398m).
 
 ![Me pointing down towards the fog](../img/20-1703-descent.jpg)
 
-m4_caption({{{{{
-Down there, that's where we have to go. Do you see it? Me neither.}}}}})
+m4_caption({{{{{Down there, that's where we have to go. Do you see
+it? Me neither.}}}}})
 
 We walk for two hours in the rain and the fog before reaching the
-village. Two hours may not sound like much, but it felt like an
-eternity.
+village. Two hours may not sound like much, but it felt like an eternity.
+
+Just before the village, we pass by a place called
+[*Val di Morins*](https://www.alta-badia.org/en/highlights/sights/val-di-morins-mill-valley/),
+which means "Mill Valley" in Ladin.
+
+![A watermill](../img/20-1816-mill.jpg)
+m4_caption({{{{{
+A watermill. In this area it was common to build half-pipes
+with larch trunks to lead the water to the mill.
+}}}}})
 
-The village of Lungiarü, in
-[Val Badia](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Val_Badia), is quite nice, but
-we have no energy for sightseeing. All we can do before falling asleep
+The village of Lungiarü, in [Val
+Badia](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Val_Badia), is quite nice, but we
+have no energy left for sightseeing. All we can do before falling asleep
 is a shower, dinner, and trying to dry our clothes for the next day.
 
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