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@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ m4_navtable(← Day 9,../day9, Alta Via 2,../, , )
 
 My dad's cousin came to pick us up. As we got into the car, the
 storm started.  From there, it kept raining the whole afternoon. Not
-coninuoussly, it came and went, but it when it was there it was
-strong. The bad weather continued for a couple of days.
+coninuously, it came and went, but when it was there it was
+very strong. The bad weather continued for a couple of days.
 
 We made a good call ending our trip early.
 
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ We made a good call ending our trip early.
 
 *August 29, 2025*
 
-Some of the other hikers we met along the way arrived in Feltre
-on the next day. Like use, they could not properly finish the Alta
-Via, as the bad weather caught them as they arrived at Passo Cereda.
+Some of the people we met along the way arrived in Feltre on the next
+day. Like use, they could not properly finish the Alta Via, as the bad
+weather caught them when they arrived at Passo Cereda.
 
 We decided to meet for a dinner all together at [Birreria
 Pedavena](https://www.labirreriapedavena.it/), the largest brewery in
@@ -33,23 +33,22 @@ front of the Birreria.
 
 *September 2, 2025*
 
-Upon completing Alta Via 2, hiker can receive the official AV2 pin.
-It will be awarded to them by the tourist office in Feltre, where they
-can also add their name to the book of "finishers".
+Upon completing Alta Via 2, hikers can receive an official pin. It is
+awarded by the tourist office in Feltre, where they can also
+add their name to the book of "finishers".
 
-As you know, we did not complete the Alta Via. But since Feltre is just
-around the corner, we thought why not go there and ask? In the end, the
-exact route of Alta Via 2 is not set in stone.
+As you know, we did not complete the full Alta Via. But since Feltre is
+just around the corner, we thought why not go there and ask? In the end,
+the exact route of Alta Via 2 is not set in stone.
 
-It turns out that, according to the guidelines laid out by the CAI,
-reaching Rifugio Boz is enough to officially complete Alta Via 2 and be
-called a finisher!
+It turns out that, according to the guidelines laid out by the Italian
+Alpine Club, reaching Rifugio Boz is enough to officially complete Alta
+Via 2 and be called a finisher!
 
 ![The Alta Via 2 pin](../img/99-02-pin.jpg)
 
-Indeed, they know that the last leg of the hike is often skipped due
-to bad weather. Ending the journey at Passo Cereda, however, will
-definitely not be enough.
+Indeed, they know that the last leg of the hike is often skipped due to
+bad weather. Ending the journey at Passo Cereda, however, is not enough.
 
 So now we also have some official recognition for our effort. Cool!
 
@@ -58,7 +57,8 @@ So now we also have some official recognition for our effort. Cool!
 *September 3, 2025*
 
 After the hike I spent a few days at home with my family. But now it is
-time to go back to the flat lands, where I live now.
+time to go back to the flat lands, where I have been living for the past
+few years.
 
 My flight back to Amsterdam, as it sometimes does, flew right over the
 Dolomites. I was able to recognize not only my home town, but also many of