From ba86aff0a60ef19e26fda9b903495084ae9c0e77 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sebastiano Tronto Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2025 20:30:17 +0200 Subject: Finished proofreading --- src/av2/after/after.m4 | 36 ++++++++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/av2/after/after.m4') diff --git a/src/av2/after/after.m4 b/src/av2/after/after.m4 index 4fb3a91..4c766bd 100644 --- a/src/av2/after/after.m4 +++ b/src/av2/after/after.m4 @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ m4_navtable(← Day 9,../day9, Alta Via 2,../, , ) My dad's cousin came to pick us up. As we got into the car, the storm started. From there, it kept raining the whole afternoon. Not -coninuoussly, it came and went, but it when it was there it was -strong. The bad weather continued for a couple of days. +coninuously, it came and went, but when it was there it was +very strong. The bad weather continued for a couple of days. We made a good call ending our trip early. @@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ We made a good call ending our trip early. *August 29, 2025* -Some of the other hikers we met along the way arrived in Feltre -on the next day. Like use, they could not properly finish the Alta -Via, as the bad weather caught them as they arrived at Passo Cereda. +Some of the people we met along the way arrived in Feltre on the next +day. Like use, they could not properly finish the Alta Via, as the bad +weather caught them when they arrived at Passo Cereda. We decided to meet for a dinner all together at [Birreria Pedavena](https://www.labirreriapedavena.it/), the largest brewery in @@ -33,23 +33,22 @@ front of the Birreria. *September 2, 2025* -Upon completing Alta Via 2, hiker can receive the official AV2 pin. -It will be awarded to them by the tourist office in Feltre, where they -can also add their name to the book of "finishers". +Upon completing Alta Via 2, hikers can receive an official pin. It is +awarded by the tourist office in Feltre, where they can also +add their name to the book of "finishers". -As you know, we did not complete the Alta Via. But since Feltre is just -around the corner, we thought why not go there and ask? In the end, the -exact route of Alta Via 2 is not set in stone. +As you know, we did not complete the full Alta Via. But since Feltre is +just around the corner, we thought why not go there and ask? In the end, +the exact route of Alta Via 2 is not set in stone. -It turns out that, according to the guidelines laid out by the CAI, -reaching Rifugio Boz is enough to officially complete Alta Via 2 and be -called a finisher! +It turns out that, according to the guidelines laid out by the Italian +Alpine Club, reaching Rifugio Boz is enough to officially complete Alta +Via 2 and be called a finisher! ![The Alta Via 2 pin](../img/99-02-pin.jpg) -Indeed, they know that the last leg of the hike is often skipped due -to bad weather. Ending the journey at Passo Cereda, however, will -definitely not be enough. +Indeed, they know that the last leg of the hike is often skipped due to +bad weather. Ending the journey at Passo Cereda, however, is not enough. So now we also have some official recognition for our effort. Cool! @@ -58,7 +57,8 @@ So now we also have some official recognition for our effort. Cool! *September 3, 2025* After the hike I spent a few days at home with my family. But now it is -time to go back to the flat lands, where I live now. +time to go back to the flat lands, where I have been living for the past +few years. My flight back to Amsterdam, as it sometimes does, flew right over the Dolomites. I was able to recognize not only my home town, but also many of -- cgit v1.3